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Letter: What the writers of a recent Tribune op-ed on education could learn from the writer of a Public Forum letter

FILE - This April 20, 2016, file photo shows copies of The Salt Lake Tribune newspaper in Salt Lake City. The Tribune newsroom takes up one floor of the building that bears its name, overlooking snow-capped mountains and the arena where the Utah Jazz play. Once a Digital First property that dealt with staff reductions and feared closure, the paper was sold to a prominent local family in 2016. Since then, its reporters received their first raise in a decade and won a Pulitzer prize for investigative reporting. (AP Photo/Rick Bowmer, File)

Thumper’s mother might have said, “If you can’t say something clearly, say something impressive.”

I was struck unavoidably by the unfortunate contrast between the jargon-laden column “How Utahns can build a better education system — in spite of national uncertainty,” signed by two good people, and Hannah Fleming’s much briefer, clear and specific letter, “To build a healthier society,” in a recent Salt Lake Tribune. The column reads like staff work (been there, done that myself). I would hope to hear more in the future with greater clarity and specificity from the signers of the column.

Henry Whiteside, Salt Lake City

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